grandma goodbye see you next time."then she drove off and away.
When we got inside I took off my shoe's because they were soaking wet,so were my socks.After my brother and i did our job's we asked to go on his phone i asked to go on the computer to buy and look at motorcross gear, mum said,''yes but not for too long.'' I asked my mum'' mum come and help me pick me some motor cross gear.'' ''okay Brody'' after a couple of minute's my mum saw a navy blue and orange motorcross shirt,she said "look at this Brody"
After 3 minute's my mum said"ok hop off'' ''ok mum.'' Thanks for reading my holiday news by Brody
Kia Ora Brody,
ReplyDeleteLovely blog, it was really interesting reading about what you did during your holiday. I can hear you love motor cross.
Excellent writing skills and wonderful use of direct speech.
From Mrs B
thanks mrs B
DeleteHi brody
ReplyDeletenice work.
I like your work
Zara
thanks Zara
Deletekia ora Brody nice blog it is a nice holiday news it is funny
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ReplyDeleteHi Brody,
ReplyDeletenice blog and I hear that you had a soaking wet shoe.
great direct speech.
by Ryan
thanks Ryan
ReplyDeleteHi Brode it look like you rely love motor cross so much and a interesting
ReplyDeleteholiday you had and It seems that you had trouble piking you motor cross
ts from keita.