Persuasive Writing

Dear mum and dad

I would like some new motorcross gear please.

I would like some new motorcross gear because I'm to small for my own gear.

It's so big that I have to make it so tight but it still fulls down.

I will take a lot of care with it.I will buy it with my own money.

I hope you understand my reason why I need some new motorcross gear,from Brody.