Why Stoats Are a Pest

Stoats are pests because they kill their prey by jumping on its back of them and bite their preys neck, so that their prey cant breath, so it dies.Stoats are a pest because they kill 25 million native birds and other native animals!! They have no predators so that makes them a pest and a big threat to the environment in NZ. But the only predators are us humans, so we trap them because they are pests. 

We have been learning about P.E.E.L, this makes a better paragraph, P is for point, E is for elaborate, the other E is for example, and L is for link. I think it is a good way to make a better paragraph.